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Jul 27, 2008 08:12

... goddamnit, I have the Den-o opening stuck in my head now. Next batch, and have the last of the dups at the end of this one! Also, Gmail got a little funky with some of the formatting and has been homphgomphing special characters and whatnot. I fixed what I could ( Read more... )

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get_sometail July 27 2008, 15:25:33 UTC

My out was Takaya Sou, and I went with Goku #2 on the dup.

Edit: Out on Tetra, too.

Tetra Apper get_sometail July 28 2008, 01:44:49 UTC

If you wouldn't mind it, could I have some crit?

Re: Tetra Apper get_sometail July 28 2008, 03:47:59 UTC

The voice was just nooot quite there for me. Some of it got lost in the meta, I think.

Re: Tetra Apper get_sometail July 28 2008, 04:10:05 UTC

Ah, so that's it. Thanks for the crit, it's appreciated!

xen0glossy July 27 2008, 15:34:32 UTC

Abstain on Basara for uh. Meaning to beta and not getting around to it? I'm sorry, and good luck! ♥ Also, I went with Goku #2. Everyone else in!

perennially July 27 2008, 15:46:47 UTC

All out, abstain on dup for beta.

Feel free to poke me for crit or a reread ♥ !

Shinkurou apper perennially July 27 2008, 16:54:43 UTC

Could I ask for some crit, please?

Re: Shinkurou apper alexander July 27 2008, 17:06:15 UTC

THE SHORT: I had a pretty hard time getting into your app and my attention span kept wandering while I was reading it.

I can give more crit later tonight /o; sorry I'm distracted by TV atm.

Re: Shinkurou apper monogamiss July 27 2008, 18:10:32 UTC

OKAY BACK AGAIN sorry if you felt like I brushed you off or something XD but I was watching a special on the history channel and wasn't sure when the round was closing. HERE WE GO.

I am a big sucker for beginnings, especially HOOK YOU GRAB YOU BY THE BALLS BEGINNINGS and I had a hard time getting through the first few paragraphs. There wasn't a lot of THIS VOICE!1 or JOKE!1 for me to grab onto when I was reading. The app felt sort of long and I kept feeling voice jumps, being unable to really pin down who the character was, and there was a mismatch of canon to app in this case for me.

Good luck!

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o_sarchasm July 27 2008, 15:55:18 UTC

Just voting on the dup for now, since I know the canon and twofers always need more votes at the end of the day. :|b So! In for Goku #2, and if this round is still open when I get back from ~*~momma birthday things~*~ I'll take a look at the other apps.

letshilbertluv July 27 2008, 16:04:15 UTC

In on everyone, abstain on the dup for inability to pick.