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[theboxization]

NEXT ROUND! And another dup at the end.

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. Closed!

Comments

[mustloveballs]

Sup guys! Rinoa, Vyvyan, and Tatsumiya, In! Everybody else out, and abstaining on the Laharl's. c-caps

Not so awesome at crit, but ask if you want! If you're borderline, tell me and I'll go reread.

[mustloveballs]

TOTALLY MEANT MANA o japan

Roxy apper.

[mustloveballs]

Even not so awesome concrit is still better than no concrit at all. I'd like to hear what you think.

Re: Roxy apper.

[mustloveballs]

Mostly the jokes didn't do it for me. They kinda fell flat, I guess, and the app seemed a little rushed and jumpy. I had to go reread the whole thing just now so I could remember why I didn't like it -- Roxy seems like a really interesting character, but the app wasn't memorable for me.

Hope that helps some!

[durandork]

RINOA!

[_overshadowed_]

I. I am such a picky bitch. Both Laharls? O...out. Laharl is one of my most favorite characters ever and as such I hold you both to horribly high standards

[_overshadowed_]

Also Laharl 2 another note since I DO wanna help you? Don't begin so many sentences with ...

It looks really bad in an app. And the constant use of it takes away from it's effectiveness. I point this out because when I comment as Ari I tend to overdo that myself and I always am like AUGH oops damnit. Just something to keep in mind for next time.

Laharl #2

[_overshadowed_]

Ahhh, okies. Thanks for the crit, I'll most likely apply again in the future~ I'll be sure to get a beta reader next time though, didn't have one this time around.

[angelamourpeach]

I want him to come meet Yousuke someday. D:

[xen0glossy]

My outs were Fay and both Laharls (though saying that makes me sad ;_;).

Also, holy crap, it's a Young Ones app. It's always a surprise to find that someone else has heard of it. (Are you the one who apped from it a while back, or was that someone else?)

[hackstheplanet]

IS IT NOT AWESOME.

I considered apping Rick at one point but realised that calling the zombies fascist pigs who are subjugating the socialist order would probably only amuse me.

[xen0glossy]

IT SO IS.

Hey, I'd vote that in.

[keeperofthesoul]

That and Wolfwood said I'm not allowed to app ever again.

[cuevoiceover]

Rinoa, Roxy, and Mana are my ins for now! Rinoa, very cute voice and app, I really thought it showed off her character. If you don't make it, reapp. Roxy is another good voice, and Mana ahaha omg rape kata.