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[noooodley]

One more round after this SO VOTE!

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOOOOOOOOTE :(. I LOVE YOU ALL closed an hour and a half later |D

Comments

[robenwizrdharem]

OH SHIT THERE WERE TWO IU APPERS?

LE VOTES

[inpignation]

Apparently Negi can't vote because he's too young.

Abstain for Capell and Chloe because of betaing.
In for Edward and Original Ion. O.Ion - my concerns from last time as to what you'll do in camp do kind of remain but that's a fantastic app so why the hell not. Edward, you could have used a few more gags or catches in there, perhaps, but it's not like they're necessary and you have the voice down.
Out for Seki Rei and Koenma. Koenma: your app wanders a lot and I found it hard to read because you're breaking pace every couple of words; even with a spazzing character it's best to try to keep the amount of back-and-forth down. Seki Rei iiiiiit was close but you've strange phrasing or grammar here and there and some awkward repeated jokes like an unusual repetition of the pets thing. (Are you an overseas person? If so, lemme know.)

Further comments if required, poke me but I am ill.

[crowdedinhere]

Voted as marezydoats. Koenma Out, all others In.

A note for Chloe about the canon section: I don't know if it's just me, but as someone who's never played Tales of Legendia, I found your basic description of the plot of the game rather, mrrr.... difficult to follow! I came out of that still not having a real grasp of what the game's about... I liked your app regardless, as obvious by voting it in, but I don't know, I just thought that I wanted to say something about that. Forgive me if I'm being incoherent, I dunno.

Chloe Apper

[crowdedinhere]

A-ah, no, I know exactly what you mean, and I apologize for any confusion I might have caused you. ^^; Thanks for the comment, I'll keep it in mind for when I do future apps.

[boosterrific]

Koenma was my only out.

Abstain on Capell for beta~ ♥

[emogivesuwings]

Koenma was my only out. As Sokka said, the app was too short and jerky, I didn't get a sense of the voice, and that's what I look for in apps. Also, it didn't tickle my funny buttons, but that's more subjective.

I can provide more crit if needed o/

[a_noble_temp]

Koenma was my only out.

Capell apper, when are you taking him from? There were a few voice issues that made it wibbly for me depending on the answer, but I'm a huge sucker for a boner joke (hrr hrr), so it was still a pretty easy in. ♥

[a_noble_temp]

from fairly early on in the game -- before the end of disc one, really.

I-I'm glad I'm not the only sucker (er...) for a boner joke ^^;

...Capell Apper!

[a_noble_temp]

please pretend I don't fail! Yeah that was me. ^^;

Re: ...Capell Apper!

[scootermcgaffin]

In that case, early game then the voice is A++ well done!