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[recurrence]

Apps are now closed! As a side note, we'd like to make a request - please do not comment to the CFUD comms with journals from other games! Your personal journal is cool (and wlu audience). Your character journals are fine! But it's been getting a biiiit confusing when X character journal from another game comments to an OOC comm post or what have

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[thistimenomercy]

TEZUKAAA~

[beamkkake]

*joins in the squealing over Ashe*

All in!

[freak_of_love]

That's an ALL IN! Ennis and Tezuka~ What a lovely round~

Ashe

[freak_of_love]

I'm sorry to bother you, but it seems it wasn't all in. . . May I ask for crit?

Re: Ashe

[freak_of_love]

Gah! Sorry REALLY sorry about that~ Of course you can ask, because I feel like a jerk for forgetting to mention that. Proves I shouldn't walk away from the computer before commenting. My train of thought crashed. ^^;;; Sorry, sorry!

Anyway! My problem with it wasn't large, it was kinda a wibble on my part, because I felt like it was a bit too stiff. It didn't really grab me. I felt like the beginning was an awesome, wonderful starter and it grabbed my attention immediately, but the rest felt a bit... mundane? It felt really long and rambling, like a diplomatic speech, which I wasn't entirely expecting after the canon. I kinda imagined someone more passionate, less political.

However! I will say that I'm not entirely canon familiar so it might be a mis-giving on my half. I will still be wishing you the best of luck because it seems that my opinion is in the minority, and a lot of people think you did well. Soooo~ good luck and gosh I'm sorry for being negligent.

Ashe

[freak_of_love]

No, it's alright! And thank you for the crit!

[manofsteal]

Aaand another all in.

[hatesyouontop]

TEZUKA AND ASHE *_*

All INs~