I can't believe it (in more than one way) FULL

[camilla1d]

A/N: I really enjoyed writing this, and it is my first ever 1D oneshot, so some feedback would really be nice, thanks xx (might write a squeel if anyone wants it, or I just feel like it...)

“I just…” Zayn was at loss of words, he didn’t know what he was supposed to say next. “I don’t know what to think anymore Lou.” And with that he closed his eyes

Comments

[henny4you]

Ahh, this was so cute :) Also, I did not let out a squeel when I saw your current location... I swear I freak out every time I see Norway being mentioned internationally, lol

Your English is also very good and I might be a tad envious :D
I did see some possessive errors in the beginning though, you'd forgotten the apostrophe some places :)

But like I said, it was really cute and I liked it :)

[camilla1d]

Thank you so much, will hopefully have time to go over it this weekend, so glad you liked it :D xx