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Entanglement of Destiny

Jun 11, 2012 16:52

Author: mara93
Title: Entanglement of Destiny
Rating: G
Characters Arthur, Merlin (all Arthur’s POV)
Summary: A trap of fate…
Warnings: none
Word Count: 1000
Prompt: tangled
Author's Notes: This is future cannon with a ‘what if’ kind of situation.

( Excalibur, rise to your duty… )

c:merlin, rating:g, *c:mara93, type:drabble, pt 010:tangled, c:arthur

Comments 9

luxorien June 12 2012, 01:33:31 UTC

Neat! Love this dialogue - very much in character. Shows their bond without being sappy. I quite enjoyed this.

mara93 June 13 2012, 00:30:57 UTC

Great, because I strived to not make it sappy, lol. Glad you enjoyed the dialogue too. Thanks for a lovely reply. ❤

hogwartsvixxxen June 12 2012, 04:15:16 UTC

OHMY I loved this. I loved the conversation and relationship between Arthur and Merlin and oh I loved this part “I told you Tom forged this and Kilgharrah burnished it, but it’s not a dog, Arthur.” Merlin teased, mischievously getting the sword to fly into Arthur’s grasp.

mara93 June 13 2012, 00:32:00 UTC

Oh yay, some of my fave moments on the show are when they converse. Glad you liked that part. I enjoyed writing it. Thanks! ❤

hogwartsvixxxen June 13 2012, 02:09:44 UTC

Mine too ♥ *hugs* :)

archaeologist_d June 12 2012, 14:30:27 UTC

I loved that Merlin was there for him but that he thought it was better if he wasn't beside Arthur until the time was right. Well done.

mara93 June 13 2012, 00:34:01 UTC

Merlin's so selfless often. I wanted to convey that through Arthur's voice really. So thank you for mentioning Merlin's feelings and for such a nice comment. ❤

yenny2206 June 13 2012, 22:23:35 UTC

I like it!

mara93 June 14 2012, 03:26:06 UTC

Thanks! ❤