Rendezvous

[archaeologist_d]

Author: archaeologist_d
Title: Rendezvous
Rating: R
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: Arthur is an idiot. But Merlin isn't exactly thinking straight when they have a fight about language.
Warnings: all dialogue
Word Count: 888
Prompt: Rendezvous
Author's Notes: Am trying to experiment with dialogue only stories. Sorry about that. Also

Comments

[avidrosette]

I love it! Great voices.

[archaeologist_d]

Thank you!

[adsullatta]

I really like this! It's very charming <3

[archaeologist_d]

Thanks. Glad you liked it. :D

[merlocked18]

I actually cried a little in the middle. I DON'T EVER WANT THEM TO FIGHT, OKAY?! SUE ME. *wipes eyes*
Thank you, dialogue-only somehow fit here, because it was about language - very meta, which also appeals to me as a reader.

[archaeologist_d]

But they have to fight so they can make up! Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.

[inspired_being]

This is wonderful! I really enjoyed how you used the dialogue to suggest their actions.
I can just imagine Arthur spilling his heart out as faster as he can after Merlin agreed to give him a minute xP

[archaeologist_d]

Thanks. I do like to play with dialogue. And yes Arthur was probably panicking a little bit, thinking that the love of his life was walking away. Thanks for reading!

[brunettepet]

Poor Merlin must have been putting himself through the emotional wringer while Arthur was nervously building up to the proposal. Arthur's confession was heart felt and charming and I can see why Merlin fell for him in the first place.

[archaeologist_d]

Arthur isn't really good with emotions - or words. Poor Merlin just didn't know how to take it or what was going on.

Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.