Ready or not, here I come!

[5leggedcricket]

Author: 5leggedCricket
Title: Ready or not, here I come!
Rating: G
Pairing/s: None
Character/s: Merlin, Will
Summary: Merlin and Will play hide-and-seek.
Warnings: Minor character death
Word Count: 1005 words
Prompt: #169 I'm here
Author's Notes: Beta'd by the awesome TheHatMeister. Written for the 'kidfic' square and the 'injury and illness' square for Merlin Tropes Bingo

Comments

[archaeologist_d]

Poor Will. At least Hunith found them both. Well done.

[5leggedcricket]

Thank you. :)

[adsullatta]

*cries* This is really well written and it's horrible! Poor Will! Poor Merlin!! Thinking about how guilty both Merlin & Hunith will feel and then about poor Will's mum and just...oh my heart breaks for all of them ;_;

[5leggedcricket]

I felt it was time to make someone else than just Merlin suffer for once. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it (unless your heart breaking is a bad thing?). Thank you for your comment!

[brunettepet]

This beautifully captured the sense of being young and breaking the rules and the frustration of not really understanding just how terrible the situation is. Poor Will. I just hope Hunith came home in time to save the little rule breaker.

[5leggedcricket]

Spoiler: I don't think she did.
I wasn't sure what I tried (the POV from a child who doesn't fully understand what's going on) would work, so I'm glad you think it did. Thank you! :D

[aeris444]

Beautiful but heartbreaking! Good job with this!

[5leggedcricket]

Thank you so much for commenting (even though this has been posted for a while, so you could've thought it wasn't worth it)! Oh, you've got no idea how this made my day! :D

[aeris444]

I'm often late reading and commenting drabbles here but I read every slash drabble!

I'm glad it made you happy! ;-)