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When the Battle's Lost and Won

Jun 08, 2015 02:39

Author: Gilli_ann
Title: When the Battle's Lost and Won
Rating: G
Pairing/s: None
Character/s: Nimueh, Morgause, Morgana
Summary: When High Priestesses are killed, is that truly the end?
Warnings: None
Word Count: 800
Prompt: 163 - Picnic in the sun
Author's Notes: I was hoping to create a strange and spooky mood and setting, and borrowed a few words and ( Read more... )

*c:gilli_ann, pt 163:picnic in the sun, c:morgause, rating:g, type:drabble, c:nimueh, c:morgana

Comments 5

thismaz June 8 2015, 04:51:28 UTC

I was hoping to create a strange and spooky mood and setting
You succeeded in that. The pleasure and relaxation of the main part of the story turns suddenly both threatening and melancholy at the end.

gilli_ann June 11 2015, 11:06:55 UTC

Thank you, I'm happy you think it worked!

brunettepet June 10 2015, 17:40:14 UTC

I enjoyed the lurking menace of this place even while they were making merry. I really like the idea of these three being Macbeth's three witches.

I love this line: Dread drips from the air like rain. Creepy, indeed.

gilli_ann June 11 2015, 11:09:46 UTC

Yay! Happy that you think so. I thought it was interesting trying to have them tie Merlin and Macbeth together.

archaeologist_d June 14 2015, 02:31:49 UTC

I liked how it was creepy and a bit unnerving. Also the descriptions were lovely, giving an air of mystery and menace at the same time. Well done.