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'Finding Out: The Hard Way' for argentsleeper

Dec 28, 2014 22:42

Title: Finding Out: The Hard Way
Recipient:argentsleeper
Author: inspired_being
Rating: PG
Pairing/s: Arthur/Merlin (established), (with Gwaine and Mithian as side characters)
Summary: Merlin has been distant, Arthur jumps to conclusions and they both learn a lesson or two.
Warnings: Angst! (with happy ending), hurt/comfort
Word Count: 5233 (I got slightly carried away and ( Read more... )

c:merlin, *c:inspired_being, p:arthur/merlin, rating:pg, c:mithian, !holiday exchange fest 2014, type:drabble, c:gwaine, c:arthur

Comments 4

brunettepet December 28 2014, 14:58:12 UTC

Merlin was being secretive and avoid-y but he didn't deserve this level of distrust after 18 months of happiness. Arthur really went off the deep end and nearly ditched a man that loves him. I hope he's learned his lesson (and if he hasn't at least he has Gwaine to steer him straight).

yenny2206 December 28 2014, 15:43:37 UTC

It was nice seeing Gwaine as the voice of reason on this. I think Arthur was right in getting jealous and jumping to conclusion, I would have done the same. I'm glad they got their happy ending though.

amarie_authiel December 28 2014, 16:58:14 UTC

Oh dear! I can see why Arthur would misunderstand the kiss, but I wish he had listened to Gwaine! ...And it's hard to believe I just wrote that! XD Sane!Gwaine, you don't see that too often, he so often the joker. It's nice to see him in this role. :)

argentsleeper December 31 2014, 07:07:45 UTC

This was absolutely perfect. I loved jealous Arthur and poor secretive Merlin and wise Gwaine and Mithian's existence (she is my favourite non-main character).

Thank you so much for this lovely fic!