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Frozen

May 21, 2012 22:03

Author: neyah444
Title: Frozen
Rating: G
Character/s: Balinor, Hunith
Pairing/s: Balilnor, Hunith
Summary: Her eyes were shining though she had promised herself she’d be strong.
Word count: 100
Author’s notes: this takes place in the pre-canon era. Betaed by jelazakazone. Thank you, bb for taking a look at it this late!

( Frozen )

rating:g, p:balinor/hunith, type:drabble, pt 007:family, *c:neyah444

Comments 16

mara93 May 23 2012, 04:14:57 UTC

I love your Balinor dialogue and 'voice'. He just feels so in character. This is heartbreaking and probably how it went for them. I would love a scene like this on the show.
And the last lines...perfect.

neyah444 May 23 2012, 07:46:04 UTC

I'd love to see Balinor again on show too. I was so said when he died, he was such a good character.:(
Thanks!

fuckyeah May 24 2012, 12:45:52 UTC

This was just beautiful and heartbreaking. I'm really sad that we didn't get to see more of Balinor's character before he died, so this interaction between him and Hunith is wonderful!

neyah444 May 24 2012, 15:08:50 UTC

I'm very glad you liked it. This is not the first time I'm writing about Balinor, I loved his character. And I plan to extend this drabble in the future, that should be interesting. I still hope we'll see Balinor on the show again, probably in flashbacks or something. One can always hope:)