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In the Night

May 12, 2012 22:03

Author: mara93
Title: In the night
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Arthur,Guinevere
Summary: There is one kind of whisper, and then another…
Warnings: none
Word Count: 337
Prompt: Whispers in the Night
Author's Notes: Another wonderful prompt!

( The stars hypnotize their eyes )

p:arthur/gwen, *c:mara93, type:drabble, pt 006:whispers in the night, rating:pg-13

Comments 17

yllimilly May 17 2012, 00:13:09 UTC

This was simple and beautiful at once, and I must say my favorite part were the last three lines.

Very nice read :)

-Milly

mara93 May 18 2012, 06:07:15 UTC

Ah, that was the balance I felt and wanted. Glad the last lines worked. Thanks so much for the lovely comments!

archaeologist_d May 17 2012, 00:33:40 UTC

That was very sweet. Well done.

mara93 May 18 2012, 06:07:52 UTC

Ah, thanks!

hogwartsvixxxen May 18 2012, 06:01:45 UTC

Arthur/Guinevere isn't my pairing of choice but I took a chance and I loved it. The characterazation and the romance wasjust amazing as was the imagery. Well done. ♥ *hugs* :)

mara93 May 18 2012, 06:14:01 UTC

Ah, I have so much respect and appreciation for people who take a chance on what they read. Per show I'm pretty much cannon on the relationships, but honestly in fic I really enjoy reading a lot of friendship, but also slash Arthur/Merlin because I think it shows some of the best writing of their characters. So when someone takes a chance on A/G it makes me happy. :)

I'm glad those parts worked because they're vital to me when I write. Thanks so much! On a little side note, this community is so awesome!

And *Hugs!*

hogwartsvixxxen May 18 2012, 13:14:14 UTC

Thank you. ♥ Well I know how hard authors work so I try and read what I can, also to open my own eyes. I might be missing a great pairing. *hugs* :)