The Jester

Jan 25, 2014 16:26

Author: pawpawpaku
Title: The Jester
Rating: General Audiences
Pairing/s: None (though I guess you could take this as A/M if you wanted, but nothing is mentioned)
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin, mentioned OC
Summary: "You are the most outrageously boneheaded person I have ever met!"
Warnings: None.
Word Count: 688
Prompt: #093 Stubborn
Author's Notes: ( Read more... )

c:merlin, rating:g, type:drabble, pt 093:stubborn, *c:pawpawpaku, c:arthur

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ur_lionheart January 26 2014, 05:19:54 UTC
Ahaha this was funny and I loved the way you described things, it's like I could picture it so vividly. Also Arthur and Merlin and their relationship is so spot on in this one! :)

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pawpawpaku January 26 2014, 10:48:23 UTC
Ooh thank you :) I have been trying to develop the language I use to describe characters and settings so it's good to hear its paid off :3

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osky291 January 27 2014, 06:22:18 UTC
First to post? Woah :D

I loved how Arthur knew exactly what bird!Merlin was thinking. Great use of the prompt. Made me grin almost throughout :D

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pawpawpaku January 27 2014, 19:33:41 UTC
Welllll... Somebody had to :P

Thank you! I definitely had to write something upbeat and fun this time, so I'm glad my work (that is (measly 600 words of it) paid off :3

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millionstar January 28 2014, 21:54:09 UTC
That might be one of the most descriptive and gorgeous opening lines I've read in a long time - and it just got better from there, too. Loved every word - you've encapsulated their little world perfectly. Bravo!

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pawpawpaku January 29 2014, 20:01:20 UTC
Oh thank you! What praise - I'm so happy to hear you liked it :)

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rottencreampuff January 29 2014, 18:09:35 UTC
This is described very well and I love it so much! Bird!Merlin is something new I've seen, and I like how he's been causing trouble around the kingdom :)

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pawpawpaku January 29 2014, 20:15:31 UTC
Thank you! Bird or no bird, Merlin is always causing trouble around Camelot :)

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