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It’s You, It’s me (And there’s dancing!)

Dec 31, 2013 22:36

Title: It’s You, It’s me (And there’s dancing!)
Recipient: wanderlust48
Author: ur_lionheart
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Summary: In which there’s a lot of dancing, a final exam piece, a bizzare pair, Merlin’s magic has a crush on Arthur, and Merlin isn’t much better off.
Warnings: None.
Word Count: 3899
Author's Notes: wanderlust48: I’ve tried to stick to your prompt as ( Read more... )

c:freya, c:merlin, *c:dead_pendragon, p:arthur/merlin, c:will, !holiday exchange fest 2013, type:drabble, c:gwen, c:gwaine, c:morgana, rating:pg-13, c:arthur

Comments 14

digthewriter December 31 2013, 17:08:33 UTC

I enjoyed this story so much! You did a great job! ♥

ur_lionheart December 31 2013, 17:13:33 UTC

Thank you so much! You're awesome! ♥♥

yenny2206 December 31 2013, 21:31:21 UTC

Now that was beautiful!!

ur_lionheart January 1 2014, 03:18:37 UTC

Thank you! :)

wanderlust48 December 31 2013, 22:52:12 UTC

Oooh!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!! <333
What a great thing to wake up to this new year!

The story is wonderful and sweet and I absolutely and totally love it!! Merlin's POV worked fine, and I think it's remarkable you wrote so convincingly about the dancing part although you mentioned you didn't know much about contemporary dance (a note of thanks here to your beta as well, :))

I adored the tone of it, all the little scenes that showed the development of their relationship , *flails* ( like... Arthur watching Merlin secretly, Arthur being jealous when Gwaine dances with Merlin, Merlin finally allowing Arthur to take his hand and help him up).I loved the school setting and the post-exams party with that air of "everybody's gonna move onto the next phase of life".

Merlin's magic as an extension of himself was fabulous - it is just a little bit uncontrollable, and as in love with Arthur as Merlin is, awww<33 ( ... )

ur_lionheart January 1 2014, 03:21:31 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! Well, you liking it was the whole point of this in the first place! I'm glad that this fic worked out for you. I really am, because I was a bit worried about it since I made a lot of little changes.
Thanks for the lovely comment! \o/

rottencreampuff December 31 2013, 23:59:33 UTC

This is so lovely--I don't believe I've ever read a dance fic before, and I've enjoyed every bit of this story :)

ur_lionheart January 1 2014, 03:22:07 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading your first dance!fic :)

47eleven January 2 2014, 13:46:23 UTC

Fantastic fic!

ur_lionheart January 3 2014, 08:39:40 UTC

Thank you!