You Bring Out The Worst In Me

[karuvapatta]

Author: karuvapatta
Title: You Bring Out The Worst In Me
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Merlin
Summary: An evening at his best friend's house should be easy to navigate, but Merlin can't even be trusted with his own thoughts. And showering, as it turns out, doesn't help.
Warnings: Language, masturbation, whiny teenagers, underage

Comments

[archaeologist_d]

Loved the intensity of it. Poor Merlin, with all those feelings. Well done.

[karuvapatta]

Thank you! ♥

[rotrude]

Hot though Merlin's self doubt about Arthur wanting him is very interesting and suits his age in a way. Great read!

[karuvapatta]

Hahaha, I was worried he was being too dramatic but he is a teenager, he'll grow out of it :)

Thank you!

[ur_lionheart]

Aww, I wish Merlin didn't think he didn't deserve Arthur! But this was hot and cute and sad and awesome all at once. Great job! :)

[karuvapatta]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ♥

[brunettepet]

It's sad that Merlin can't even fantasize that Arthur would be happy having sex with him.

[karuvapatta]

Merlin does have some self-esteem issues, doesn't he? :D

[clea2011]

Poor Merlin and his self-doubts. Hopefully Arthur will at some point in the future prove him wrong, but that's no consolation now. Loved how this was both hot and hurt at the same time. Great job :)

[karuvapatta]

Thank you for the lovely comment! ♥