Fic: September

Dec 03, 2013 13:47

Author: karuvapatta
Title: September
Rating: G
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur, Hunith
Summary: Summer is over, autumn is here. This can mean only one thing, right?
Warnings: None
Word Count: 479
Prompt: #86 Autumn
Author's Notes: -

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c:merlin, rating:g, type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, *c:karuvapatta, pt 086:autumn

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jan_rea December 4 2013, 02:54:48 UTC
Love this! Pining Merlin trying to get over his crush on popular!Arthur is one of the tropes I really like reading, hope you consider continuing on with this! <3

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karuvapatta December 5 2013, 22:26:19 UTC
I'm waiting for the next prompt :D And thank you so much!

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clea2011 December 5 2013, 00:00:49 UTC
Ooh, this is definitely one of those ficlets that it would be lovely to have a sequel to. Hope you're going to add to it, I adored poor insecure pining Merlin :)

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karuvapatta December 5 2013, 22:27:33 UTC
I'm still wondering if Merlin won't just be left alone for ever, MWAHAHAHAHAHA *evil laughter*

Just kidding :D Thank you for your comment! ♥

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rotrude December 7 2013, 05:25:17 UTC
Oh,of course, autumn equals new school year. Loved the Merlin/Arthur banter, Merlin being more open and admitting to missing Arthur and Arthur playing it tough with Merlin responding in kind from then on. It's very them, imho. Anyway great moment of insight into them. <3

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karuvapatta December 7 2013, 16:46:18 UTC
Thank you so much! I enjoy their banter and their total inability to express their feelings and I'm really glad you think I pulled it off ♥

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brunettepet December 11 2013, 19:53:27 UTC
I really like this open, affectionate Arthur and how much he obviously likes Merlin. Merlin is never getting over his epic crush.

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karuvapatta December 11 2013, 21:49:11 UTC
Thank you! And no, he isn't :D

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aeris444 December 13 2013, 18:26:08 UTC
Nice drabble! I loved how in a few word you depicted perfectly their relationship and how deep Merlin's feelings are!

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karuvapatta December 15 2013, 00:06:00 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it ♥

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