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Ravaged

Nov 05, 2013 19:37

Author: aeris444
Title: Ravaged
Rating: PG
Pairing/s: None yet
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin, Gwaine
Summary: Merlin is brought back to Camelot
Warnings: mention of sexual slavery
Word Count: 1109 (oops...)
Prompt: #82 Storm
Author's Notes: Thanks to ( Read more... )

c:merlin, pt 082:storm, type:drabble, c:gwaine, rating:pg, *c:aeris444, c:arthur

Comments 15

brunettepet November 5 2013, 19:22:19 UTC

Poor Merlin. He's trapped and at Prince Arthur's mercy. I hate Arthur for stealing his life away and taking him like it's his right.

aeris444 November 8 2013, 20:27:56 UTC

Yeah, he hasn't any mean to escape Arthur... for now ;)

archaeologist_d November 5 2013, 19:28:05 UTC

Merlin should kick him in the gonads. What a terrible thing to do and Arthur is so conceited he thinks it will be fine. Good job with this.

aeris444 November 8 2013, 20:28:20 UTC

Oh, he will do it!

Thanks!

47eleven November 6 2013, 11:23:35 UTC

Very poignant

aeris444 November 8 2013, 20:28:50 UTC

Thank you!

By the way, who is on your icon?

47eleven November 10 2013, 11:17:22 UTC

That is the very lovely Matthew Bellamy from Muse :)

ur_lionheart November 6 2013, 13:24:25 UTC

I felt for Merlin. I really like your writing style (and I hope you continue writing this I really want to read more of this!)

aeris444 November 8 2013, 20:31:21 UTC

Wow! You don't know how much your comment makes me happpy! English is not my first language so it feels great to know that you love how I write! Thank you!

And I will continue this series when the prompt will fit!

judin November 7 2013, 09:23:32 UTC

This serious is totally my guilty pleasure. Except I don't feel guilty.

It's so yummy! :D

aeris444 November 8 2013, 20:31:55 UTC

Don't need to feel guilty! ;)

Thank you!