Fic: One fine Monday

Sep 24, 2013 15:20

Author: osky291
Title: One fine Monday
Rating: G
Pairing/s: one-sided Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: Merlin decided that Mondays were not that bad after all
Warnings: None really
Word Count: ~600
Prompt: Nervous
Author's Notes: Same universe as last week's drabble Foolish Boys

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pt 076:nervous, c:merlin, rating:g, c:gaius, p:arthur/merlin, *c:osky291, type:drabble, c:arthur

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k_nightfox September 25 2013, 01:45:29 UTC
Aww! Poor nervous Merlin! You describe that absolute panic of being faced with your crush so well here!

He could hardly remember how to breathe. Was he breathing too hard? What did he normally do with his feet? Where do his hands go, when they're not doing anything?

Perfect.

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osky291 September 25 2013, 03:11:44 UTC
Writing from experience ;)

Thanks a lot for leaving a comment! Perfect? Pfft, hardly! :D

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jessa_anna September 25 2013, 02:40:04 UTC
This was almost painful to read because it brought me back to high school crushes and all the nerves. Great job!

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osky291 September 25 2013, 03:13:05 UTC
Haha! Yeah, we're all in the same boat there. BUT I got a drabble out of it so... *not complaining*

Thank you!

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47eleven September 25 2013, 11:23:59 UTC
Lovely!

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osky291 September 25 2013, 12:27:19 UTC
Thank you!

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candymacaron September 25 2013, 12:03:14 UTC
Merlin, Merlin, hoping that your crush will borrow your notes... that was sweet and awkward and totally believable. Well done! :D

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osky291 September 25 2013, 12:26:42 UTC
I'm glad it was believable because I was worried I had pushed it too far. Thank you!

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aeris444 September 25 2013, 17:31:47 UTC
Aww! The description of Merlin's feeling was perfect! It was like going back to high school! ;)

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osky291 September 25 2013, 17:58:53 UTC
Haha thanks! I'm having fun writing shy!Merlin.

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