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The New Prisoner

Sep 01, 2013 17:33

Author: alba17
Title: The New Prisoner
Rating: PG
Pairing/s: Gwaine/Percival
Character/s: Gwaine, Percival
Summary: Head jailer Percival is intrigued by the new prisoner, Gwaine.
Warnings: None
Word Count: 1000
Prompt: #73 - Attraction
Author's Notes: Playing around with an idea for a canon AU inspired by The Hangman's Daughter books by Oliver Pötzsch ( Read more... )

pt 073:attraction, p:gwaine/percival, type:drabble, rating:pg, *c:alba17

Comments 10

47eleven September 2 2013, 11:44:58 UTC

I like this!!

alba17 September 3 2013, 00:03:55 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad!

candymacaron September 3 2013, 03:14:35 UTC

Nicely drawn out story, and I can completely see Gwaine and Percival in these roles. Well done!

alba17 September 3 2013, 11:43:31 UTC

Thanks! I'm trying to decide if I want to write a longer story in this universe or if this satisfied my itch.

brunettepet September 4 2013, 21:14:10 UTC

I enjoyed the tension you built between these two and how Percival's puzzled by the attraction but can't seem to keep away from Gwaine.

alba17 September 5 2013, 11:55:32 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad it worked. Might expand.

clea2011 September 5 2013, 00:06:08 UTC

I like the way you've used the prompt here and built up Percival's attraction - he can't understand it, but then who ever can understand attraction when it comes along unexpectedly?

alba17 September 5 2013, 11:56:27 UTC

Thanks! If I expand this, I'll make it a much more gradual thing.

archaeologist_d September 9 2013, 14:54:10 UTC

I liked this a lot. Could totally see it!

alba17 September 10 2013, 13:36:19 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad it worked. Toying with expanding it.