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Ordinary at Best

Aug 17, 2013 20:22

Author: weepingwillow9
Title: Ordinary at Best
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin
Summary: "Come home with me?"
Warnings: None
Word Count: 528
Prompt: Despair
Author's Notes: Bear with me guys, I'm ALMOST at the sex. May have cheated a little with the prompt and gone for despair-ate or desperate, but I didn't want to ruin their ( Read more... )

c:merlin, pt 071:despair, *c:weepingwillow9, type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, rating:pg-13, c:arthur

Comments 8

destiny_chicken August 17 2013, 23:28:05 UTC

Lovely, just lovely. I particularly liked this phrasing:

the way he holds himself so confidently and yet Merlin can see hints of hairline cracks, just around the edges of the whole façade.

Well done. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter...

weepingwillow9 August 18 2013, 09:36:37 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked the writing, it was harder than expected to get back into after my week off :/

clea2011 August 18 2013, 00:16:28 UTC

That's lovely :) There's absolutely no way Arthur is going to be able to walk away from this in the morning - hopefully! :)

weepingwillow9 August 18 2013, 09:38:45 UTC

I'm sure he's even further gone than he thinks! Thank you!

osky291 August 18 2013, 12:58:49 UTC

Oh I love this story already and now I love it a little more <3

weepingwillow9 August 18 2013, 13:10:35 UTC

Hehee, thank you!

aeris444 August 24 2013, 18:42:58 UTC

That's really beautiful! And I loved how Merlin still thought about Will but dismissed it quickly.

I'm lookinf forward to the next part!

weepingwillow9 August 25 2013, 17:31:29 UTC

It's time to move on, isn't it? Thank you!