Paint It Black

May 01, 2012 04:56


Author: neyah444
Title: Paint It Black
Rating: G
Character/s: Merlin
Summary: No light in sight to devour the dark…
Warnings: unbeta'd, evil!Merlin (?)
Word Count: 120
Author's notes:  I’m not really sure what this is. It started out as a drabble I swear, but it turned out something completely different.  *chewing lips nervously*

Paint It Black )

c:merlin, rating:g, pt 004:surrender, type:drabble, *c:neyah444

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jelazakazone May 1 2012, 03:03:23 UTC
Waaa:( Why does Merlin have to be sad in so many different ways, including this one?

I thought this was interesting.

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neyah444 May 1 2012, 03:05:48 UTC
I didn't mean this to be sad actually. I was writing something else. I don't know what happened, I'm in a good mood actually. Eh, whatever.:)

Thanks for reading! I promise I'll try something less angsty and sad next time:D But I'm glad you found it interesting.

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alby_mangroves May 1 2012, 03:07:54 UTC
Pain is the prayer that paints his mind black - Wow. This is so desperate and stark! It stinks of his tiredness and despair. Well done x

Oh man, I want to gather him up and give him.... chicken soup? IDEK.

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neyah444 May 1 2012, 03:15:43 UTC
I know what you mean. It really turned out that way. It's probably because at 4AM mind mind stopped working properly.

I'm really happy you liked it:) Poor Merlin, he's a victim of the fanfic writers' cruelty, lol.

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alby_mangroves May 1 2012, 03:18:31 UTC
HE IS!!! I'm torturing him a little right now. He's just so... receptive ;)

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neyah444 May 1 2012, 03:23:16 UTC
Well, doesn't it suck to be a fictional character? It's better if we torture him than if the show's writers do the same.

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hogwartsvixxxen May 1 2012, 04:43:24 UTC
♥ OHMY! WOW! This was just amazing so full of a spectrum of emotions. *hugs* Great Job no need to be nervous.

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neyah444 May 1 2012, 13:05:11 UTC
So nice of you to say that:) It means a lot. ♥

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hogwartsvixxxen May 1 2012, 13:24:50 UTC
♥ :) *hugs*

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mara93 May 1 2012, 05:25:22 UTC
I love the flow and imagery in this. Just pure poetry and yes it's dark and sad, but it's the strong flow that really gets me. Love it!

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neyah444 May 1 2012, 13:06:58 UTC
I'm glad you loved it. Thank you:D

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yenny2206 May 2 2012, 01:49:00 UTC
Really, really intresting hon. I like it :)

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neyah444 May 2 2012, 05:39:07 UTC
I'm happy you find it interesting:) Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

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