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Here at the End of All Things

Jun 11, 2013 21:34

Author: luxorien
Title: Here at the End of All Things
Rating: PG
Pairing/s: N/A
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin
Summary: The years fall away like the ashen feathers of a phoenix, and Merlin remakes them in flames.
Warnings: Post-Series 5, so implied spoilers for entire show.
Word Count: 704
Prompt: #61 - Broken
Author's Notes: N/A

( Here at the End )

c:merlin, pt 061:broken, *c:luxorien, type:drabble, rating:pg, c:arthur

Comments 12

k_nightfox June 12 2013, 01:50:16 UTC

Ouch *shivers* That is chilling...sad...haunted. Beautiful. Thank you <3

luxorien June 12 2013, 01:56:01 UTC

Thanks. Glad I could spread my bleak outlook and ennui. xD

issy5209 June 12 2013, 02:04:36 UTC

beautiful, sad ...
excellently written

luxorien June 12 2013, 02:12:09 UTC

Thanks!

47eleven June 12 2013, 04:30:17 UTC

Nicely done indeed

luxorien June 13 2013, 01:40:39 UTC

Thanks!

destiny_chicken June 12 2013, 11:01:51 UTC

Oooh, I wasn't expecting that ending! Great writing--full of emotion .

luxorien June 13 2013, 01:42:01 UTC

Thanks! I almost populated the city with rotting corpses, but that amplified Merlin's Creep Factor past my tolerance. :P

archaeologist_d June 12 2013, 23:14:55 UTC

Very sad. I loved that it was Merlin Arthur had to save.

luxorien June 13 2013, 01:46:38 UTC

Thanks. I liked the idea of the universe giving poor Merlin a break after he gave literally everything trying to save the human race.