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(Un)conscious surrender

Apr 30, 2012 11:15

Author: jelazakazone
Title:(Un)conscious surrender
Rating: G
Character/s:Arthur, Elyan, dripping dead druid boy
Summary: Elyan stands firm
Warnings: dripping dead druid boy, S4 spoilers
Word Count:100
Prompt: #4: surrender
Author's Notes:I've been wanting to write Elyan stories for a while now and thought this was a good opportunity.

( When Elyan sees the boy, dripping.... )

c:elyan, rating:g, pt 004:surrender, type:drabble, *c:jelazakazone, c:arthur

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alby_mangroves April 30 2012, 15:20:10 UTC

Was your warning intentionally hilarious? Or was it your plan to make me spit my tea everywhere? It's 1.20 in the morning and I'm giggling like an idiot... oh, wait. That's my normal state.
Oh.
But really, wow. Well done! Very strong one hundred words right there. Great job!

jelazakazone April 30 2012, 15:23:11 UTC

*meep* Um, I dunno? I didn't mean for it to be so funny, but I thought some people might find the dripping druid boy to be disturbing.

Are you in Australia? What are you doing up at 1:20am?

Um, I'm glad I made you laugh. I hope you spit your tea not on your computer.

Thank you. I'm glad you found this powerful.

alby_mangroves April 30 2012, 15:27:45 UTC

Yes, I am in Australia, and even though it's stupid o'clock, I'm feeling inspired so I am drawing for my writer's Big Bang story. And and I loved your drabble! It's just the warning I was unprepared for. Normally you get your "Character Death" or "Strong Violence" or even "Implied Molestation of Rabbits" but I've never seen "Dripping Dead Druid-Boy". It was QUITE AWESOME :DDD

jelazakazone April 30 2012, 15:31:43 UTC

:) Excellent. Glad I could make laugh. I guess I'm in a kind of strange mood this morning.

\o/ for inspiration! I hope it doesn't mess you up too much for tomorrow.

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hogwartsvixxxen April 30 2012, 15:44:02 UTC

♥ The warning is what got me. Great drabble for just 100 words! Well done, it was very powerful! I loved this part When Elyan awakes, face wet with his king's tears

jelazakazone April 30 2012, 15:50:12 UTC

The warning made you want to read it? I guess I need to warn for S4 spoilers too.

Thank you.

hogwartsvixxxen April 30 2012, 16:31:24 UTC

LOL not really it did intrige me though I guess I need to warn for S4 spoilers too.
I'm slow I kinda thought that it sounded familiar

♥ :) *hugs*

jelazakazone April 30 2012, 17:40:28 UTC

You know, there is that dead dripping boy in S2 2.08 (Sins of the Father). :D

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fuckyeah April 30 2012, 20:04:51 UTC

Oh, what a lovely use of the prompt; I would've never thought of this, but it makes sense!

jelazakazone April 30 2012, 20:06:33 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this.

yenny2206 April 30 2012, 20:35:53 UTC

This was really well done my love.

jelazakazone April 30 2012, 20:36:37 UTC

Thanks darling. I'm glad you liked it!

yenny2206 April 30 2012, 20:39:06 UTC

I did.

I was afraid of reading because of the warning, I am a scarry cat, so I watched that episode during day light with my fam in the room. So glad to because it was one's of Bradleys best acting scenes.

jelazakazone April 30 2012, 20:41:42 UTC

Aw. That ep was second in creepiness only to the season opener(s). Bradley went above and beyond in that scene. He really brought it, I agree. It's an amazingly powerful scene.

neyah444 April 30 2012, 22:50:18 UTC

Very powerful! I love this cause it sums up the whole episode perfectly. Great job!

jelazakazone April 30 2012, 23:00:01 UTC

Thanks so much:D Glad you found it powerful. That's what I was aiming for.

neyah444 April 30 2012, 23:02:24 UTC

Heh, you always succeed! ♥

jelazakazone April 30 2012, 23:03:15 UTC

I think sometimes I'm more successful than others, but I try! Thanks:D

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