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Under Avalon

Feb 12, 2013 12:15

Author: alba17
Title: Under Avalon
Rating: G
Pairing/s: Arthur/Merlin
Character/s: same
Summary: In silence, Arthur waits.
Warnings: None
Word Count: 920
Prompt: #44 Silence
Author's Notes: Post S5 ( Read more... )

pt 044:silence, rating:g, type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, *c:alba17

Comments 10

brunettepet February 12 2013, 17:38:06 UTC

Arthur straining in the silence, waiting and hoping even as he's drifting in and out of conscious thought was beautifully written.

I can only hope this story has a happier ending then their last one.

alba17 February 12 2013, 18:07:55 UTC

Thanks so much! I hope so too.

jelazakazone February 13 2013, 01:45:03 UTC

Wow, this is a great beginning. It's so atmospheric and poetic. Well done.

alba17 February 13 2013, 02:43:52 UTC

Oh thanks! I wasn't sure if it worked.

jelazakazone February 13 2013, 02:44:45 UTC

Yep. It works for me:D

archaeologist_d February 13 2013, 23:18:00 UTC

Lovely. I liked how Arthur's thoughts really told of the passing years.

alba17 February 25 2013, 12:51:59 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

weepingwillow9 February 22 2013, 12:03:28 UTC

I loved the way you captured the dream-like state. And You’ve been all this time in the tavern, haven’t you? - perfect!

alba17 February 25 2013, 12:52:44 UTC

Thank you. That's what I was going for. Wasn't sure about that line though, since it was so flippant compared to the seriousness of the rest.

weepingwillow9 February 25 2013, 20:33:21 UTC

Oh, you definitely got it right!