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A Geography of Scars

Apr 24, 2012 18:35

Author: rotrude
Title: Geography of Scars
Rating: pg
Pairing/s: Arthur/Merlin, Arthur/Gwen
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur, Gwen
Summary: Arthur needs salve. He finds out about the price of Merlin's devotion.
Warnings: None.
Word Count: 903
Prompt: Scars
Author's Notes: Spoilers for S4. Let's say that this takes place a few months after the S4 finale. ( Read more... )

c:merlin, pt 003:scars, c:gwen, p:arthur/merlin, rating:pg, c:arthur

Comments 11

fuckyeah April 24 2012, 19:18:22 UTC

YES! I love fics like this, where there's Arthur/Merlin and Arthur/Gwen, and everyone is okay with it. This was sweet and cute and guh! *melts into a puddle of happy goo*

rotrude April 25 2012, 00:31:24 UTC

It's a scenario that makes me happy. So it's worked its way here. I'm glad you found the drabble cute :)

yenny2206 April 25 2012, 00:07:46 UTC

I so hope season 5 is like this, (well I just want Merlin/Arthur but I knoe Gwen will be there as well)

Great story love!

This line, just beautiful.

“I touched you but I never did,” Arthur said, pained by his own blindness. He was a man cursed to see only too late. “I took but I never saw. I...”

rotrude April 25 2012, 00:32:24 UTC

I like them all happy. I do hope S5 has got lots of magic drama, and action and more magic though.

I'm glad you liked that line. Thank you :)

hogwartsvixxxen April 25 2012, 06:12:07 UTC

♥ This was perfect. I love how they came together and how I think Gwen sort of knew. I love this “I never said 'no' to any of your touches.”

rotrude April 25 2012, 14:17:18 UTC

Gwen does know. I left it as just implied or the drabble would have become, well, not a drabble, but I did try to make her sound in the know. Basically I went for a &they're all happy scenario. Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked that sentence. And thanks for reading. :)

hogwartsvixxxen April 25 2012, 18:57:19 UTC

♥ :) *hugs*

alby_mangroves April 26 2012, 23:55:37 UTC

"...His lips were soft and plump like the rest of him wasn't..." I loved that. Wonderful!

rotrude April 27 2012, 18:04:38 UTC

Glad you liked that line! Thanks so much :)

ms_notebook April 28 2012, 18:11:31 UTC

Oh my goodness, this touched my heart. I love Arthur/Merlin and Arthur/Gwen fics. This one is very amazing. Just... Arthur paying witness to all that Merlin has done for him, in service of him.

Merlin really is like a knight.

The words "geography of scars" sent shivers down my spine. Amazing piece!!

rotrude May 1 2012, 18:10:29 UTC

I'm really glad you liked this. Merlin has helped Arthur so I thougth that Arthur seeing it would compare him to a knight because in his head that's a brave figure. Thanks for reading :)