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Candle in the Dark

Jan 22, 2013 19:59

Author: Luxorien
Title: Candle in the Dark
Rating: PG
Pairing/s:
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin, Gwaine, Leon, Percival
Summary: When all other lights go out.
Warnings:
Word Count: 390
Prompt: Ball
Author's Notes:

( Candle in the Dark )

pt 041:ball, c:merlin, *c:luxorien, c:percival, rating:pg, type:drabble, c:gwaine, c:leon, c:arthur

Comments 8

dante_s_hell January 23 2013, 01:03:52 UTC

I love the description of Merlin's magic and its effect on Arthur! Wonderful story!

luxorien January 23 2013, 04:44:12 UTC

Thanks! I love playing with Merlin's power. :)

rocknvaughn January 23 2013, 11:16:06 UTC

Awesome! I love when we see Merlin's magic in battle, especially when its big magic, like this!

luxorien January 23 2013, 17:32:57 UTC

Me too, haha. Glad you liked it. :)

realiztic January 23 2013, 15:56:29 UTC

Great imagery! Love how you described magic being a sort of a heart-mirror of the one who casts it, and how the reassurance of that light gives Arthur an adrenaline rush :) I also love that little bit about Percival for some reason -- it's always great to see him being included.

luxorien January 23 2013, 17:36:11 UTC

Thanks!

Yeah, I've been thinking of doing more with the knights lately because they are such underutilized characters. And I figured Percival is so big, he probably counts as three men in a defensive formation. xD

archaeologist_d January 30 2013, 11:04:47 UTC

Great description of the magic and how Arthur reacted to it.

luxorien February 1 2013, 02:04:03 UTC

Glad you liked it. I tried to make him understanding without being gullible.