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Fic: Dreams Come True

Dec 01, 2012 12:41

Author: jelazakazone
Title: Dreams Come True
Rating: PG
Character/s: Merlin, Mordred, Leon, Gwen
Summary: What happens after Mordred kills Arthur.
Warnings: Death of Arthur referred to.
Word Count: ~975
Prompt: 22: All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them.
Author's Notes: This takes place immediately after Your Secret is Safe. Thanks to cecilegrey, fleete, ( Read more... )

c:merlin, pt 035:amnesty post, c:mordred, rating:pg, pt 022:quote, type:drabble, c:gwen, c:leon, *c:jelazakazone

Comments 4

archaeologist_d December 1 2012, 18:28:17 UTC

Very cool idea. I liked how Mordred was also haunted by what he'd done.

jelazakazone December 1 2012, 20:24:56 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad it all worked for you. I am having everyone be conflicted and angsty these days. I want my fluff back!

millionstar December 4 2012, 01:56:02 UTC

Merlin had ended countless lives to keep Arthur alive for the sake of a prophecy from a dragon’s lips.

I just really loved that line; simple yet extremely powerful. That's one of the things I love most about the way you write.

Really enjoyed this one. <3

I would really like to see a continuation of this simply to see how Mordred reacts further.

jelazakazone December 4 2012, 02:33:45 UTC

First of all, thank you so much for this feedback. I love your comments.

Second of all, heh. You know I ended this here because I had no idea how to continue, right? And now, you want more? Ack!

Crap. I keep trying to think of a threesome scenario I haven't done with Arthur/Merlin/Mordred for someone else, but clearly, that is not going to work here. I have an idea for a Mordred/Merlin story, but it's only a thin wisp at the moment and really not fledged at all. Maybe tomorrow will bring better plot bunnies:D