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Devotion (Frozen stars verse)

Nov 28, 2012 02:28

Author: judin
Title: Devotion
Rating: G (Series rating: R)
Pairing/s: Arthur/Merlin
Character/s: Arthur, Queen Annis, Mordred
Summary: Arthur speaks to Mordred and the Queen.
Warnings: Angst, issues of rape.
Word Count: 1345
Prompt: #34 Devotion
Author's Notes: This installment was supposed to be three times as long, but after endlessly writing and re- ( Read more... )

c:merlin, rating:g, pt 034:devotion, p:arthur/merlin, c:mordred, type:drabble, *c:judin, c:arthur

Comments 4

archaeologist_d November 28 2012, 02:05:35 UTC

Loved the part where Arthur tells Mordred about the druids and how they can remain as long as they don't practice magic. That would certainly explain why Arthur accepted Mordred as a knight since he had to know Mordred was a druid.

Am also very depressed about the show ending and all the rumors about the last episode. Sobs.

k_nightfox November 28 2012, 04:38:40 UTC

I love Annis's sneaky question to Mordred about what he'll do if asked to fight against Druids. It was certainly quite a dig at Arthur.

Also love how Arthur realizes just how lost he is without Merlin, how if he acknowledges his loss aloud, it will destroy him.

Kudos!

(I sure feel you on the Merlin news knocking you off your writing. It did me for almost a day and that wasn't time I could afford!)

weepingwillow9 November 28 2012, 08:21:31 UTC

I think you got Annis and Arthur's relationship just right here, and the despair Arthur feels at losing Merlin. Well done!

exx_cecilegr November 29 2012, 01:15:48 UTC

Fascinating scene here. I love the way you write. Great update!