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Challenge: #31 Heartbeats Title: Lost Heartbeats

Nov 06, 2012 21:25

Author: hpfangirl71
Title: Lost Heartbeats
Rating: PG 13
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: Arthur can't deal with a great loss
Warnings: Death of a child, immense grief, and extreme angst. Unhappy Ending.
Word Count: 262
Prompt: #31 Heartbeats
Author's Notes: Sorry for the sadness. Also, sorry this is posted a bit late.

( The heartbeats of a loved one go almost unnoticed until they cease to exist… )

pt 031:heartbeats, c:merlin, *c:hpfangirl71, type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, rating:pg-13, c:arthur

Comments 5

bunnysworld November 7 2012, 05:30:29 UTC

:(
This has me in tears. Poor boys.

hpfangirl71 November 7 2012, 12:05:53 UTC

I know... it broke my heart just to write it :(

I almost wanted to add some fluffy fix it all ending but then I decided to tough it out and let the boys be unhappy for once.

Its sad to lose a child and for some reason that's all my muse thought of when I saw this prompt... it just insisted on being written. :(

bunnysworld November 7 2012, 13:35:08 UTC

*eats the cookies and sniffles sadly*

archaeologist_d November 7 2012, 16:03:48 UTC

Poor guys. I liked how Merlin couldn't make things better even with magic.

hpfangirl71 November 8 2012, 03:31:50 UTC

I thought it would better to make him helpless for a change. I felt bad for doing this to them but the muse was in an angsty mood!!