Author:
nativestarTitle: On and On, We Keep Going
Rating: PG
Pairing/s: None
Character/s: Merlin & Arthur
Summary: A universe is trapped between one heartbeat and the next.
Warnings: Angst
Word Count: 163
Prompt: Heartbeats
Author's Notes: Not my usual style, but I'm doing mini nanowrimo and I'm trying to work outside my comfort zone. I hope it works. (
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Loved the mirroring of the first and last lines.
What I didn't like, was the ambiguity of the ending, because AAARGH! I want him to live! If the sun rises with Arthur's hope, then Arthur's hope grows, right? Did I misunderstand? But then, why is Merlin still and quiet? Is he resting? Is he dead? Askjfglsdkjgst!
So yeah, great stuff. <3
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This is quite beautifully written though.
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