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And the Earth held its breath

Oct 24, 2012 04:08

Author: judin
Title: And the Earth held its breath
Rating: R (Series rating: R)
Pairing/s: Arthur/Merlin
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin, knights of Caerleon and Camelot.
Summary: Arthur struggles with shame, guilt and desire.
Warnings: Angst (+ minor spoilers for 5x02)
Word Count: Onethousandand*COUGHHARKCOUGH*
Prompt: #29 Misunderstanding
Author's Notes: ( Read more... )

pt 029:misunderstanding, rating:r, c:merlin, p:arthur/merlin, c:percival, type:drabble, c:gwaine, *c:judin, c:arthur

Comments 20

k_nightfox October 24 2012, 03:14:45 UTC

Oh, my poor wounded boys! Arthur is nursing guilt like he raped Merlin and I'm pretty damn sure Merlin is nursing the same guilt. A little less stoicism and a lot more open communication would put that to rights, but, alas, not these two. This fills the "misunderstanding" prompt beautifully while also being a seamless continuation of "While the Stars Froze Above You". Perfect.

I love this sooo much. You can't know how happy I am to hear you have another part coming!

judin October 31 2012, 16:57:02 UTC

*rolls around on the ground* Niiiice comment. *happy puppy*

mushroomtale October 24 2012, 03:14:45 UTC

OMG! That was beautiful. *stars in eyes* Truly. Thank you! <333

*surreptitiously follows you to your own LJ with an intent to stalk*

judin October 31 2012, 17:02:45 UTC

I'm afraid I post woefully little on my lj, as most of my stories go to communities, but thank you anyway. I'll try to update now and then, for you. :P

archaeologist_d October 24 2012, 11:00:06 UTC

This is absolutely gorgeous. Love your word play, the emotions of it and how you've woven a perfect picture of what is going on. Loved it. Want more!

Could you put in the link to the other story so I can read them together? Thanks!

judin October 31 2012, 17:03:39 UTC

Thank you! There is now more.

And I've made a link now, which I had forgotten for some reason. Thank you for pointing it out. :)

kayson135 October 24 2012, 19:11:55 UTC

That was just beautiful. I absolutely adored this story and the amount of emotion you packed into so few words. I hope there will be more! Will they come to a resolution or eventually let it fall into memories, creating a semi-rift? Lovely, lovely!

judin October 31 2012, 17:01:38 UTC

There will be more! In fact, there is more, right now, and hopefully next week as well.

We shall have to see where the story takes us. ;)

andiwould October 24 2012, 19:47:07 UTC

I LOVE this. I'm glad to hear there's another part!

judin October 31 2012, 16:57:52 UTC

There are more parts indeed. Can't leave the boys hanging here. :D