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The Climbing Wave

Aug 28, 2012 19:15

Author: Luxorien
Title: The Climbing Wave
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: None.
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin, Mordred.
Summary: Sometimes winning doesn't feel like it.
Warnings: Someone probably doesn't survive.
Word Count: 564
Prompt: #21 Promise

( The Climbing Wave )

c:merlin, *c:luxorien, type:drabble, c:mordred, rating:pg-13, pt 021:promise, c:arthur

Comments 6

hogwartsvixxxen August 29 2012, 02:18:51 UTC

I loved this. Very well done. "I've put a lot of work into you. Don't screw it up."

"You wouldn't know work if it bit you in your skinny arse." Love it.

luxorien August 29 2012, 18:18:05 UTC

Thanks! I wasn't sure if I was trying to write comedy or drama, heh.

hogwartsvixxxen August 30 2012, 07:14:47 UTC

A Dramedy LOL either way I loved it. ♥ *hugs* :)

inspired_being August 29 2012, 12:13:28 UTC

The way you set this out was brilliant. The little snippets of flashback and the banter!
At first I thought it would be a sad ending, but I'm glad you made it a happy one. Great job!!!

luxorien August 29 2012, 18:19:23 UTC

Thank you for the kind words. I considered killing one or both of the boys off, but then Merlin got that 1000-watt grin on his face and it was all over. :P

weepingwillow9 September 4 2012, 09:09:57 UTC

Loved this!