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Promise of More

Aug 26, 2012 15:37

Author:kayson135
Title: Promise of More
Rating: PG
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Characters: Arthur, Merlin, mention of OMC
Summary: Arthur is not jealous.
Warnings: Modern AU.
Word Count: 785
Prompt: #21 Promise
Author's Notes: Not sure where this came from. First time posting in here, it was a bit of a challenge and I think I still got a bit wordy!

( Promise of More )

type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, rating:pg, *c:kayson135, pt 021:promise

Comments 17

kianspo August 26 2012, 23:34:27 UTC

Aw, so sweet. :D

kayson135 August 27 2012, 02:32:20 UTC

Thank you!! :)

hogwartsvixxxen August 27 2012, 00:04:01 UTC

Love the ending. Merlin's right where he needs to be. Love jealous! Arthur. Well done.

kayson135 August 27 2012, 02:32:46 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

hogwartsvixxxen August 27 2012, 03:49:51 UTC

♥ *hugs* :)

kayson135 August 27 2012, 04:01:41 UTC

You're lovely. *hugs* You honestly just made my day. :) Also, your icon is absolutely adorable!

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jelazakazone August 27 2012, 17:21:25 UTC

OMG. *cries* Why can this not be canon? Don't answer that. Well done.

kayson135 August 29 2012, 14:23:45 UTC

Heehee, thank you!!!!

judin August 28 2012, 21:51:39 UTC

This was really nice. From the beginning I was reading fast to find out what would happen, even though it's a short fic. Reading drabbles is like looking through a window into a larger world, and it's up to the writer to create as sprawling or intimate a view as she can through that window. I really liked what I glimpsed through this, a much longer story than the minute or so we actually spend with the boys.

(You have a "told" in there that should be "tell". :) )

kayson135 August 28 2012, 22:48:55 UTC

Oops! I should get someone to proof read. >.< I usually catch the mistakes but I guess I didn't read thoroughly! Sorry. I'll fix it. Thank you for pointing it out! :)

Anyway, aside from my grammar!fail :p thank you so much for your lovely compliments! Usually my fics are a little longer so this was a fun word limit to play with and try to tell a story. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it and were reading quickly just to find out what happens! I agree with you on drabbles, they really do offer a small glimpse into a larger picture. That's a rather lovely thought. :) Thank you again!

millionstar August 29 2012, 03:18:58 UTC

Completely gorgeous, I adored this!

kayson135 August 29 2012, 14:24:04 UTC

You're so sweet. Thank you so much :)