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here is the deepest secret nobody knows

Feb 21, 2019 00:37

Author: ext_4137531
Title: here is the deepest secret nobody knows
Rating: Explicit
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin
Summary: Merlin wanted Arthur to know all of him, and all that he had been through. But Arthur couldn’t, how could he? He hadn’t lived Merlin’s life. He hadn’t waited. And Merlin didn’t know how to express it in words ( Read more... )

pt 352:i carry your heart, c:merlin, p:arthur/merlin, rating:nc-17, *c:fifty-fifty, type:drabble, type:drawble, c:arthur

Comments 6

archaeologist_d February 21 2019, 00:45:52 UTC

That was lovely. I loved that you used more of the poem than just that one line.

ext_4137531 February 22 2019, 18:38:26 UTC

Thank you! I cheated really because I used the whole thing. But it was so lovely and really spoke to me for these two. I had another idea in mind initially. But this is the one which won out.

ajsrandom February 21 2019, 01:01:42 UTC

What an sensual way to express the poem!

ext_4137531 February 22 2019, 18:39:04 UTC

Thank you. I was happy with the end result. 🙂

angelus2hot February 24 2019, 02:08:00 UTC

Oh my! Very well done indeed!

ext_4137531 February 28 2019, 01:30:44 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! :)