Fic: Under The Christmas Tree for fifty-fifty

Dec 23, 2017 08:59

Title: Under The Christmas Tree
Recipient:fifty-fifty
Author: alafaye
Rating: NC17
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Summary: Their first Christmas together and they get a little distracted while decorating.
Warnings: blow jobs, anal sex
Word Count: 1202
Author's Notes: To my recipient, you asked for a blow job under the Christmas tree. I hope this satisfies. Thanks to schweet_heart for ( Read more... )

rating:nc-17, c:merlin, *c:alafaye, p:arthur/merlin, !holiday exchange fest 2017, c:arthur

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slantedknitting December 23 2017, 15:08:02 UTC
Aw, this is so nice :) I really, really loved the dialogue in this. I feel like I don't read too much fic where they talk so openly and happily about all their good, good fucking. Also the "food" references lolol

Awesome job <3

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alafaye December 24 2017, 01:29:03 UTC
Thank you :D ♥

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cd_mods December 23 2017, 21:58:14 UTC
Awesome story.

Thank you for being part of the community and fest. :)

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alafaye December 24 2017, 01:31:18 UTC
Thank you!

Thanks for running the fest and community :D

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ajsrandom December 23 2017, 23:48:40 UTC
Oh these two are so good together, aren't they? :)

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alafaye December 24 2017, 01:31:51 UTC
They are great :D

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ext_4137531 December 24 2017, 01:22:56 UTC
Oh my Goodness. I am sitting here with the biggest grin on my face, alafaye! Thank you, thank you, thank you! This is absolutely perfect and just what I had in mind with my prompt (who doesn't like some delicious smut with these two gorgeous boys?).

I know the prompt was a bit corny, but most of Christmas is corny. So I revel in that. You managed to take such a small prompt and make it into so much more. I loved the combining of the domesticity of putting up the tree together with fantastic, enthusiastic sex.

This fic had so much lovely and funny moments I adore it. Here are some of my fav parts:

Merlin shuddered. "The first time you pick it out of cat's butt is the last time you ever use it."

Why do I get the impression that this might be something you actually experienced? Haha.

Merlin huffed and lifted his head. "Seriously? Under the Christmas tree? Are we really going to defile such a time honoured tradition?"

You absolutely are. I’m glad that Arthur was so convincing that it’s now going to be a tradition to do so.

"I was thinking ( ... )

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alafaye December 24 2017, 01:34:36 UTC
Oh, excellent. I was a little baffled with my assignment "blow job under the Christmas tree", but I rolled with it and managed 1200 words of it so... Go me? And I'm super glad it worked for you, the banter and all of it.

Don't worry about being late -- I rarely get to check any thing online until 8 p.m.

P.S. No I have no experienced tinsel with cats, but I have with string and let me tell you that is... *shudder* Tinsel is the same.

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ext_4137531 December 24 2017, 08:08:36 UTC
Hee, apologies for the rather vague prompt. I just wanted to give you, as the writer, more freedom with regards to what you wrote and didn't want to overwhelm you with plot points when we're a drabble community and had a word limit. Next year, I will try and give a little more detail. :)

It did totally work though.

PS. So sorry you had to experience that, I haven't as I don't have cats. But dogs are equally gross. :-p (also I LOVE your DW LJ icon)

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alafaye December 25 2017, 02:26:43 UTC
Nah it was actually very specific and easy to work with. I've never had a prompt so direct before. I usually get the assignments that are "oh, anything is fine; here's a few sentences of what I like".

:D

PS animals in general are gross ;)

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schweet_heart December 26 2017, 02:18:48 UTC
Woohoo! I'm still laughing at that cat's butt comment, lol. Love it \o/

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alafaye December 26 2017, 02:40:09 UTC
Cats eat things they shouldn't and it can be nightmareish :) Thanks! And thanks again for the beta work!

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schweet_heart December 26 2017, 22:43:40 UTC
You're welcome :)

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