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Bleeding Heart.

Jul 22, 2012 12:40

Author: Loopstagirl
Title: Bleeding Heart.
Rating: R
Pairings: Merlin/Arthur
Characters: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: It wasn't his body that Merlin was caressing.
Warnings: None.
Word Count: 501
Prompt: #16, Bleeding Heart
Author Notes: Couldn't just do one.

( It wasn’t him that Merlin’s long and talented fingers were caressing )

rating:r, c:merlin, pt 016:picture prompt (bleeding heart), type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, *c:loopstagirl, c:arthur

Comments 10

yenny2206 July 22 2012, 17:19:56 UTC

At first I thought Merlin was with someone else, and wanted to stop reading but it was just beautiful. Arthur viewing the piano as Merlin lovers and being jelous of it.

loopstagirl July 22 2012, 17:27:48 UTC

Yay!!! That was what I was aiming for with people thinking that it was a person, not the piano! So glad that it came across like that! Thanks!

weepingwillow9 July 22 2012, 18:31:40 UTC

You definitely got that across, I read it like that too! And I always love Merlin as a pianist, especially in this!

loopstagirl July 22 2012, 18:33:04 UTC

YAY!! -does happy dance- Me too for some reason! Thank you!

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hogwartsvixxxen July 22 2012, 18:47:17 UTC

I agree you definitely got that across. I was like OHNO! Great job.

sidhe_faerie July 25 2012, 16:20:43 UTC

unexpected but well done!

loopstagirl July 26 2012, 08:44:21 UTC

Yay, I'm glad it wasn't obvious what was really going on! Thank you!

archaeologist_d July 27 2012, 22:24:08 UTC

That was fun. I thought it was a lover and when I realized it was a piano, I was grinning. Very cute.

loopstagirl August 1 2012, 10:11:05 UTC

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad it wasn't obvious what was happening in this, I was worried about whether it would work or not. Thanks for your lovely reviews once again.