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Shattered

Jul 22, 2012 11:31

Author: Loopstagirl
Title: Shattered
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Merlin/Arthur
Characters: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: All he wanted was Arthur's love.
Warnings: Dark!Arthur, Rape/non-con
Word Count: 995
Prompt: #16, Bleeding Heart
Author Notes: Hmm... Is pretty much all I can say.

( “You love me, don’t you?” )

rating:nc-17, c:merlin, pt 016:picture prompt (bleeding heart), type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, *c:loopstagirl, c:arthur

Comments 10

weepingwillow9 July 22 2012, 16:50:08 UTC

Oh, I love dark!Arthur... though at the same time I want to punch him

loopstagirl July 22 2012, 16:52:53 UTC

They really could make this show so dark, couldn't they? I'll join you in the punching him though!

weepingwillow9 July 22 2012, 17:42:23 UTC

They could. But they won't. They're too scared of upsetting the children to do anything! Except kill Lancelot. Because that won't upset the children at all.

Sorry, I love this show, but it frustrates me so much!

yenny2206 July 22 2012, 17:17:33 UTC

Ok, Im off to cry now.

loopstagirl July 22 2012, 17:26:40 UTC

-hands tissues-

hogwartsvixxxen July 22 2012, 19:04:55 UTC

I love dark!Arthur but at the same time I was crying. I agree I wanted to punch him. Is it wrong that I found this deliciously dark at the same time I was crying for Merlin. The last paragraph was so gut-renching. Great job with this.

sidhe_faerie July 25 2012, 16:14:35 UTC

Wow that was a bit of a shock. I really wonder what Arthur was really thinking.

loopstagirl July 26 2012, 08:43:50 UTC

I'm not completely sure whether he knows himself, to be honest! Thank you so much for the review!

archaeologist_d July 27 2012, 22:17:39 UTC

Oh, Dark!Arthur. I liked how Merlin finally figured it out but it was too late.

loopstagirl August 1 2012, 10:10:07 UTC

Poor Merlin :'( Although weirdedly, I couldn't get this story out of my head so have actually continued it a little.