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Fortune Favors the Bold

May 22, 2017 08:22

Author: luxorien
Title: Audentes Fortuna Iuvat
Rating: G
Pairing/s: None
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: Arthur asks just one favor of Merlin.
Warnings: None
Word Count: 374
Prompt: Favor
Author's Notes: It's a magic reveal! Cuz that all I write!

( Audentet Fortuna Iuvat )

pt 263:favor/favour, c:merlin, *c:luxorien, rating:g, type:drabble, c:arthur

Comments 17

moonflower999 May 23 2017, 02:38:04 UTC

Oh god, you've broken my heart. Can't believe you could break my heart in so few words. Nice work! Now I need some fluffy fluff to stick the pieces back together.

luxorien May 23 2017, 04:20:14 UTC

Thanks for the kind words! Haven't written in a long time so I'm glad to hear I can still be depressing, haha.

I don't think I can stick the pieces together, but how about we just grind that into a fine powder, and then...

tari_sue May 23 2017, 21:24:05 UTC

Really nicely done! Feels like the start of something epic.

luxorien May 27 2017, 14:02:15 UTC

Thanks!

jelly_1andonly1 May 23 2017, 21:35:30 UTC

Wow, this was so good. Arthur's emotion felt so real and so raw.

"His voice nearly failed him, and he felt less a king than ever in his life." - My favourite line, the way he hates himself for telling Merlin he has to run.

luxorien May 27 2017, 14:02:27 UTC

Thanks!

pelydryn77 May 23 2017, 22:41:08 UTC

Oh wow. You got my emotions zinging all over the place. Fantastic.