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Harvest feast

May 03, 2017 09:18

Author: amarie_authiel
Title: Harvest feast
Rating: r
Pairing/s: (preish?) Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: Warnings:
Word Count: ~710
Prompt:#260:artist-appreciation-harvest
Author's Notes: Hey there, Comfort Zone, whatcha doing all the way over there??? ( Read more... )

rating:r, c:merlin, c:gaius, pt 260:artist-appreciation-harvest, p:arthur/merlin, *c:amarie_authiel, type:drabble, c:arthur

Comments 12

schweet_heart May 3 2017, 07:27:00 UTC

Oh, I really enjoyed this. The use of second person gives it such a dreamy yet intimate feel. And the hunter/nature imagery is so well done! I particularly loved the line about Arthur mounting the antlers on his wall <3

amarie_authiel May 5 2017, 06:08:17 UTC

Thank you! I haven't used second person before, from what I can recall. Whimsy's art felt like it was inviting me in, so I am glad I could recreate a little bit of that feeling in my little fic.

Arthur and his trophy hunting... Rarely goes as planned when Merlin's around.

moonflower999 May 3 2017, 08:18:50 UTC

I really like the various contrasts between the two, but my favorite are the lines about kings wearing gold and emeralds and Merlin wearing oats and berries. And I love the switch in Arthur's perception at the very end.

amarie_authiel May 5 2017, 06:31:50 UTC

Thank you. I enjoyed the contrasts, and having Arthur observing but not really understanding, and catching on eventually.

en_ki_duu May 3 2017, 14:47:49 UTC

Wow!! This was breathtakingly beautiful, I really enjoyed it. The second person is very well done, and your descriptions really breathe life into the story. I love the contrasts! The ending is just-amazing, seriously, I adore it to pieces. Your writing is so very wonderful and I could read it forever <3

amarie_authiel May 7 2017, 12:19:29 UTC

I am lost for words. I am so glad you liked and thank you for this lovely comment!

michaelssw0rd May 3 2017, 17:24:02 UTC

Oh wow. This is gorgeous. I love it a lot!! Like... REALLY well done.

amarie_authiel May 7 2017, 12:31:50 UTC

*blushes* Thank you. I have struggled a bit with my writings lately, but one look at Whimsy's art and the muses wouldn't shut up.

ajsrandom May 3 2017, 19:42:18 UTC

It's exciting but at the same time, soothing. I really liked how Arthur learned to humble himself over the years so when the time came to this, he could be on equal ground with Merlin.

amarie_authiel May 7 2017, 13:00:26 UTC

Thank you, I am glad I managed to put that idea into words. :)