Comments | camelot_drabble: Hold It Against Me

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Hold It Against Me

Feb 20, 2017 17:54

Author: alx_diamond
Title: Hold It Against Me
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur, very minor Merlin/Others
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: “If I told you you have a nice body,” the man he’s been grinding on starts after they’ve been going a while.
Warnings: None
Word Count: 1,000
Prompt: #250: Pick Up Lines
Author's Notes: Arthur is totally that guy ( Read more... )

pt 250:pick up lines, c:merlin, *c:alx_diamond, type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, rating:pg-13, c:arthur

Comments 18

schweet_heart February 21 2017, 03:13:11 UTC

Hot and funny. Loved it!

alx_diamond February 22 2017, 14:04:04 UTC

Thank you!

eilonwy77 February 21 2017, 04:34:34 UTC

Oh Arthur. Oh Merlin. Wow.

I love your description of the dancing... You can say things about it that I could never dream to say, and it makes for very vivid imagery. Very nicely done

alx_diamond February 22 2017, 14:11:38 UTC

Thanks :D I'm personally not big on dancing or clubs in general, so I'm glad the descriptions worked.

archaeologist_d February 21 2017, 16:45:40 UTC

Merlin's quite a sucker for pickup lines. LOL. Very cute.

alx_diamond February 22 2017, 14:12:02 UTC

He really is. Thanks!

tari_sue February 21 2017, 20:56:49 UTC

Lol, both funny and hot! Great job :)

alx_diamond February 22 2017, 14:12:53 UTC

Thank you!

ajsrandom February 21 2017, 23:25:56 UTC

Wow, he really was that guy- fortunately for him it worked, LOL! :)

alx_diamond February 22 2017, 14:21:18 UTC

Right? It should never work, but Merlin sometimes makes bad choices and also likes a challenge.