Comments | camelot_drabble: Part 1. Smile though your heart is aching

amarie_authiel in camelot_drabble

Part 1. Smile though your heart is aching

Jan 17, 2017 20:52

Author: amarie_authiel
Title: 5 times Merlin fell even deeper in love and 1 time he learned he was not the only one. Part 1. Smile, though your heart is aching.
Rating: R
Pairing/s: Arthur/Gwaine, Merlin/Percival
Character/s: Merlin, Percival, mentions: Arthur, Gwaine, Hunith.
Summary: 5 times Merlin fell even deeper in love and 1 time he learned he was not the ( Read more... )

*c:amarie_authiel, rating:r, pt 245:enough, type:drabble, p:merlin/percival, p:arthur/gwaine

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archaeologist_d January 17 2017, 21:44:18 UTC

I liked how you went from sad to funny. Loved the idea of putting down papers because Gwaine wasn't housebroken. :D

amarie_authiel January 18 2017, 11:30:08 UTC

Thank you. :D I was hoping that joke wasn't too weird. ;)

Laughter is healing I find, in my limited experience.

Masterlist. itsanonyx January 18 2017, 10:25:50 UTC

Hey,

I saw that you added PG-17 as Rating and NC-17 as Tag.

I'm not that familiar with the Ratings for FanFictions. So I added NC-17 to the Masterlist (because of the Tag).

Please let me know if you want me to change this in the Masterlist.

Thank you. :o)

Re: Masterlist. amarie_authiel January 18 2017, 11:16:32 UTC

Right! I missed that, I was focusing on '17'.
...oh darn diddely, google tells me NC-17 is stronger than R? Perhaps I should go with R then. *hides face*

We don't use either of those here, and I suck at rating my work anyhow. Oh well, lesson learned and maybe I'll remember next week.

Re: Masterlist. itsanonyx January 19 2017, 00:16:56 UTC

Changed in the Masterlist. :o)

Re: Masterlist. amarie_authiel January 19 2017, 13:43:21 UTC

Thank you! ^_^

aeris444 January 18 2017, 16:01:28 UTC

I was really exciterd when you told me you'd write a sequel to Four beddings and a funeral... i'm not dissapointed! This is really beautiful!
I loved the part with Merlin and his mum... And how Merlin was still struck by the revelation of his feelings for Percival!

I'm looking forward to the next part!

amarie_authiel January 18 2017, 17:15:27 UTC

Awww shucks, now you make me blush! I am excited about this and I have more ideas brewing, so stay tuned! :D

brunettepet January 18 2017, 18:39:27 UTC

There's a lot to process in losing the father you barely knew and it's lovely that Arthur and Gwaine are collecting those clippings for Merlin to look at when he's ready.

Merlin's crack about Gwaine being housebroken lightened the mood considerably.

amarie_authiel January 19 2017, 14:21:20 UTC

It's not something one bounces back from just like that. But I think Merlin is looking for bright spots in his life to keep going.

Next part will be a lot lighter, it is so far at least. :)