*GASP* The scene with Sephiroth and Vincent was so heart-wrenching!!! *sniff* Of course Sephiroth´d be afraid to not be loved, bt the way how Vincent assured him he would ever do was so sweet! And that he offers redemption was so cute as well, because clearly Vincent knows how important this is for peace of mind, since he experienced this burden himself *sigh* I must say that so far I did not detect any OOCnes, and you have a very beautiful, vivid writing style. Very well done!
*big huge goofy grin* Thanks! I was so worried that I'd "lose" Vincent's personality when I wrote this, 'cause you know how bloody stoic he is, but when I saw his interaction with Marlene in AC - I was taken. He struck me as being a good father, if hesitant and unsure, and I wanted to show that. I hope I did.
Also as this wrote itself, I began to notice how similar the Seph and Vin characters were as far as the 'tortured' aspect went and I thought they could be each others' redemption...and everybody deserves to be loved.
So, thanks again for the feedback! Maybe now I'll try some humor, now that I got the drama out of my system (for now)...
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Also as this wrote itself, I began to notice how similar the Seph and Vin characters were as far as the 'tortured' aspect went and I thought they could be each others' redemption...and everybody deserves to be loved.
So, thanks again for the feedback! Maybe now I'll try some humor, now that I got the drama out of my system (for now)...
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