Otalia fic - Heroes & Friends, 24b/25

[calliopes_muse]

Continued from 24a

Halfway across the park, Rafe unbuttoned his jacket trying to cool off as beads of sweat ran down the side of his face. “This sucks. They should have had it inside.”

“Well, it was planned when it was about ten degrees cooler so it made sense at the time.” Olivia stated. She was surprised when she felt Natalia’s hand casually take

Comments

[wkgreen]

The Memorial was very nicely done.

Loved how confident Natalia and Olivia was in front of everyone. :)

Waiting anxiously for the last chapter. :)

[authorw]

Love that Natalia stood up to everyone!

[ttandme69]

lovely chapter...nice to see Marina get smacked again...

Great that N&O were together and N was not backing away from O...

I have conflicted emotions...eagerly awaiting the last chapter and hating the fact that this story will be at an end... Hopefully, you will begin a new story from this point forward!

Thanks, Lisa

[bsofthewest]

Don't want this to end...really.

[ceridwyn2]

Ahhh very lovely. Loved how comfortable natalia was with holding Olivia's hand and indeed sharing a kiss in public. Natalia's response to Eleni smacking Marina was brilliant.

I know you were hoping to finish that before OVS stuff got really busy again :)