"Fire"

Oct 21, 2008 13:47

Fire

Dancing, dancing round and round,

Escalating ever Higher,

Feel your pulse pound in your ears,

Dance with with the heat

of the pulsating Fire.

You are the Storm Front,

You are the Seas,

The torrents of winds whipping higher,

Your pulse becomes Quick like molten lava,

As you dance with the pulsating Fire.

You are the Sun beam,

You are hot Flesh,

You are the ( Read more... )

fire, poem, poetry

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cr0wgrrl October 21 2008, 18:05:14 UTC
I especially like the last five lines.

I must ask, though, why the decision to include water imagery in a poem about fire?

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^_^ callingcry October 21 2008, 19:41:29 UTC
It was about the rhythmic pulsating of the world; including each of the four elements. :) Storm - wind/air, lava - earth, sea - water, and well, the rest I'm sure you get. :D

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