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Suddenly I see 1/1

Apr 07, 2011 04:14

TITLE:      Suddenly I see. 1/1

AUTHOR: Neolithicdream

PAIRING:   Callie & Arizona

RATING:    PG 13

SUMMARY: As the last episode was Callie hallucinating and not the real Callie we still need to see real Callie realising just what she has with Arizona and why things need to change.

DISCLAIMER: I do not own Calzona or any of the characters mentioned in ( Read more... )

fanfic: arizona robbins, art: fanfiction, fanfic: callie torres

Comments 39

pandora_007 April 7 2011, 04:25:40 UTC

Well.. if that is even possible you always make me HATE Mark every time more and more.. really.. you have that capacity to make me hate a fictional person.. how crazy is that??? but i do.. and i wish Arizona could run.. because in my mind.. a life with Mark and his 'im the father' all the time.. is a one way ticket to mental institution.. and Arizona deserve so much more than that.. but anyway.. i truly hope you have a second part of this in store.. i want to know what Callie will say to Arizona.. and how she will put Mark in his place..

thanks for sharing this.. you're gifted..

neolithicdream April 7 2011, 04:30:37 UTC

Is now a bad time to mention that I'm normally trying to be nice about Mark...oops! Still I had to make him horrible this time cause I'm so annoyed at him in real life(eh I mean on the show!} Oops the lines between reality and the show are getting all blurry again...time for me to take my meds ; )

possibility2 April 7 2011, 04:31:30 UTC

Wow really nice way to kind of break down exactly what happened, especially since Callie has no idea what really happened since she was not conscious. While I *hope* that Mark was sincerely sorry and sees the error of his ways, I think this fic really explores the idea of 'what if Mark still feels the same way and wasnt sincere when he apologized.' ..Which very well may be true, only time will tell(and new episodes ( ... )

neolithicdream April 7 2011, 04:34:04 UTC

Thank you very much!

moonbebe April 7 2011, 04:32:51 UTC

This made me cry. Seriously. You wrote down everything that went through my head after that episode - and I can so see Callie acting like this because she assumes that Arizona is just jealous. Please, please try to negotiate with your muse! LOL Because I seriously need to see the part where Arizona is finally made to feel like she's something... This is so well-written but it hurts my HEART!

neolithicdream April 7 2011, 04:37:02 UTC

Thanks! I think my muse(can a muse be a he?)is upset and feeling like "nothing" at the moment so I'll see what I can do to repair our broken relationship!

moonbebe April 7 2011, 04:40:20 UTC

Of course it can be a he! Mine is... LOL

Mmmm - how about offers of brownies - or tequila? LOL Tell the muse his fans don't think he's nothing!

metriosity April 7 2011, 04:44:28 UTC

This was amazing!

Arizona totally got screwed over in the episode. But JCaps nailed her scenes to the point that I don't think anyone could feel anything but intense admiration for her.

neolithicdream April 7 2011, 04:48:09 UTC

Thank you! And I agree JCap hit it out of the ballpark(she usually does)!

cdn_torii April 7 2011, 06:43:10 UTC

as with all the other comments on here. i can pretty much see this happening!!

arizona worrying about callie's well-being before her own.
mark pulling the pity party and getting the attention.
and callie being unsure of what the tension between arizona and mark is about... and instantly thinking about the three's past and the jealousy that arose!

[also - your muse can suck it. becuase you rocked this fic without them!! and it was epic worthy.. most definitely favourite worthy!! i hope you consider writing the callie/mark confrontation with some snuggling between calzona.. like gauze-paws-esque cuddling!!]

that is my rant. THANK YOU FOR THIS FIC