Fic: Ghosts 7/11

[calistomyth]

Title: Ghosts

Chapter Title: The Shining Star

Pairing: Vince/Howard
Summary: Howard is worried about Vince’s strange behaviour.  While Naboo and Bollo appear to turn a blind eye, Howard is determined to find out just what has made Vince lose his spark…

Word Count: ~2520
Genre: angst, hurt/comfort, fluff, humor,

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: implied mental and

Comments

[knightaimee]

My heart beat really loudly when I saw this. It seems to really like seeing more chapters appear and build your story up.

(I am drawing you a picture for 8)

Poor Vince...

love as always xxx

[booshbesotted]

*sobs* What's wrong with our Vince?? What has you done????

Some very poignant language and am utterly gripped by the unfolding plot...but please make Vince sparkley again! :'(

xx

[hermitknut]

This is a great way of getting into Vince's head - it gives enough information to keep the reader interested, but by having it be describing an event we already know about, you keep from revealing to much :D
Hope Espania is inspiring you to write :)
Hazel

[weekendgothgirl]

Wow this keeps getting better and better.
I loved seeing this event from Vince's point of veiw.

I'm getting increasingly worried and intriged by Vince's condition.

Poor boys!

xxx

[devourlove]

Ugh, the suspense. I love how you've written the current chapters, though. It's exquisitely out of the norm but is able to stay right in character :D i was so excited to see a new chapter, you wouldn't believe how quickly i dropped everything ;3

poor vince :( i haven't gotten the metaphor yet, but it doesn't sound very...well, sparkly :[

can't wait! xx