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leonie_alastair June 11 2012, 17:01:39 UTC
This is lovely. Very well done.

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calis_1st June 11 2012, 19:43:42 UTC
Thank you so much.

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embroiderama June 11 2012, 17:03:35 UTC
I really like the way you show Neal and June's relationship here, and making the point about everybody being concerned about Neal is lovely as well.

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calis_1st June 11 2012, 19:44:55 UTC
Thank you. I think Neal would forget he's not alone at times.

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elrhiarhodan June 11 2012, 17:34:46 UTC
Beautiful and achy, and very fresh too. A lovely look at a pivotal moment in the series.

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calis_1st June 11 2012, 19:46:53 UTC
Thank you so much. I know they didn't want Neal to spend a of of time dwelling on Kate's death in the series, but he still has to mourn for her sometime.

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iamhere23 June 11 2012, 17:43:45 UTC
I love June. This was wonderful :)

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calis_1st June 11 2012, 19:49:15 UTC
I find I write a lot more June than I expected; I would love to see more of her in the series. Thanks so much for your comments.

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ext_840786 June 11 2012, 18:01:55 UTC
That was beautiful and poignant. While it's good that Neal has Peter, etc, I think it's especially good he has June to help him, who really knows what he's going through, as much as anyone can, and you've shown that wonderfully here.

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calis_1st June 11 2012, 19:53:52 UTC
Thank you very much. June would be the only one of all of them that could tell him what to expect down the line, and try to do with him what worked for her.

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