FIC: Field Day

May 05, 2012 15:27


Title:  Field Day
Rating:  PG
Characters:  Hughes, Neal, Peter
Spoilers:  None
Word count: 2800
Disclaimer:  Really necessary?

Summary:  In order to complete an operation, Hughes must step outside of the office and into the van.  Then he has to step outside of the van and break a rule or two.

A/N:  This is in response to a prompt on Collar Corner for an ( Read more... )

genre: h/c, wordcount: 1000 - 4999, character: neal caffrey, character: hughes, genre: gen, rating: pg, character: peter burke

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leonie_alastair May 6 2012, 03:50:16 UTC
Great story!

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calis_1st May 6 2012, 11:03:04 UTC
Thanks!

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pipilj May 6 2012, 04:27:21 UTC
It was nice change for Hughes to provide H/C. you portrayed him really well.

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calis_1st May 6 2012, 11:01:53 UTC
Thank you so much.

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veleda_k May 6 2012, 04:41:19 UTC
Hughes fic! I really like this, nice interplay between Neal and Hughes.

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calis_1st May 6 2012, 11:08:48 UTC
Thank you! It seems, at least to me, that Neal's a bit cautious around Hughes in the series, and I hoped this would sound reasonable.

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pooh_collector May 6 2012, 04:45:24 UTC
I liked this a lot. Reese doesn't show up often enough in our fic world. And, you did a really good with him. I especially liked the paragraph 4th from the end with Hughes's thoughts about finding Neal bleeding out.

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calis_1st May 6 2012, 11:26:51 UTC
Thank you so very much. Hughes does need to come out and play more often. I'm glad you liked that paragraph, it's my favorite, too. I believe that, while Reese may appear gruff, he really does care deeply for his team, but as an old-school boss he doesn't show it often.

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kanarek13 May 6 2012, 08:32:58 UTC
Wow, this was great. It was definitely something new to have Hughes fill the spot usually reserved for Peter :D Awesome fill, thank you :D

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calis_1st May 6 2012, 11:28:47 UTC
Thank you so much - it was a great prompt to have!

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