FIC: Down By the River

[calis_1st]

Title: Down By The River
Author: calis_1st
Rating: PG
Characters: Neal, Peter, Jones
Spoilers: None
Word count: ~ 1700

Disclaimer: Characters are all from the brilliant mind of Jeff Eastin.

Summary: Everyone always says you can drown in just a few inches of water, but, really?

Note: Written for the "drowning" square on my h/c bingo.

Comments

[kanarek13]

Awww, seriously, only Neal! Poor guy, if it weren't for Peter and his team, our beautiful conman would have kicked the bucket a long time ago :P

I love the part when all Peter wants to do is yell at Neal, but wheat he actually ends up saying are words of comfort :D

This was now my bedtime story. Now I can go to sleep happy :D Love it \o/ Thanks for posting :D

[calis_1st]

I was just going to ask you if you ever sleep!

Thank you so much for your lovely review. Of course, you could say, if it weren't for Peter and his team Neal wouldn't NEED rescuing nearly as much.

Cheers, and good dreams.

[frith_in_thorns]

This was a very fun read! I liked Jones's knowledge being able to save the day. And I loved Peter being so worried about Neal, of course :)

[calis_1st]

Thank you! Had to get some use out of that Navy background of Jones.

I'm glad you enjoyed this.

[love_82]

I enjoyed this! Although I doubt poor Neal did. :)

I loved Peter wanting to yell at Neal but Just saying your gonna be OK instead. <3 And Jone's gift to Neal at the end. :)

Also yay for Jones and his Navy knowledge saving the day.

[calis_1st]

I'm so glad you liked this. You're right, Neal probably wasn't thrilled.

My head-canon Peter has a perfectly fine brain-to-mouth filter, and I believe he would make use of it in a situation like this (like when parents don't yell at their kids for doing something really stupidly dangerous until AFTER they make sure the child is okay). And Jones is quietly awesome, but I'm sure there's a wicked sense of humor in there.

Thanks so much for your comments.

[pipilj]

Aww this was cute. Glad Jones knew about secondary drowning. A worried and concerned Peter is always fun to read. Loved Jones gift and remark on his penmanship

[calis_1st]

Thanks so much! I think Jones, his excellent penmanship and his gift-giving prowess need to get out and play more.

I'm glad you enjoyed this.

[embroiderama]

Aw, this is awesome and really scary as well. I love it!

(And OMG I finished writing a near-drowning!Neal fic right before I read this. /0\ LOL)

[calis_1st]

Thanks so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it,

(and now I can't wait to read yours!)