Comments | calie15: Crave 2/?

calie15

Crave 2/?

Mar 24, 2011 17:19

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character: hal, rating: r, fanfic, ship: oliver/chloe, prompt: chlollieween, multi chapter, fandom: smallville, title: crave

Comments 31

geek_or_unique March 25 2011, 01:09:46 UTC

2012. LOL

This was worth the wait, but don't make us wait for the next chapter because the way you let it hanging was mean.

Crave is one of my favorite fics you wrote and I'm really really glad you updated.

This was awesome. And you're awesome.

calie15 March 28 2011, 03:22:49 UTC

I know, bad cliff hanger right? But I wanted to get it up and it was better to end it hear before I got into what happens with Damon and Chloe or it would have been double in length.

nivieniv March 25 2011, 01:57:56 UTC

yay! So happy you finally continued this!
Thankyouthankthankyouthankyou!

Very intense update! Not to mention super hot!
Loved it!

calie15 March 28 2011, 03:17:00 UTC

Thanks for the review!

bogusbabe March 25 2011, 02:43:02 UTC

You updated! YAY!!!!

OMG! Apparently Damon isn't the only one with lust-inducing powers (that's unnatural, since Oliver's come naturally... just one look and... OKAY... back to my comment...). Dis Hal get a dose too? Oh my, where's Chloe?

Can't wait for the next chapter...

calie15 March 28 2011, 03:16:37 UTC

Damon gave everyone a dose to get them occupied to steal Chloe away.

So you can only imagine how much Chloe got of it...

Crave Part 3 Please!!! voz_76 March 25 2011, 03:19:28 UTC

Love this fic! Originally found it on fanfiction.net Instantly had me craving for more!!! (Pun intended) Love the characterization of Hal, Chloe, and Oliver ... you bring them alive with your dialogue. You write the sexual tension between Oliver and Chloe - bar none. Thanks for updating ... I eagerly await the next installment.

Re: Crave Part 3 Please!!! calie15 March 28 2011, 03:14:29 UTC

Thanks for the great review! And I'm glad I got the sexual tension right. Wasn't the easiest to write.

fickery March 25 2011, 03:52:37 UTC

\o/ Yaaaaay. I was totally getting ready to harass and stalk you if you didn't live up to your end of the deal. :D Awesome update, definitely lived up to the first chapter. SO. HOT. I can picture this all so easily in my head, with the costumes and the nightclub and the music and Ollie and Chloe suddenly unable to keep their hands off each other. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

calie15 March 28 2011, 03:11:26 UTC

haha. Well I knew I needed to get it done. I think I kind of got back into the groove of it, hopefully.

I love using nightclub scenes. In my opinion it kind of goes with that sexy/angsty kind of mood. Plus, there dress is going to be different, which I have fun playing with. If that made ANY sense.